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Sarina Bowen

I write steamy, angsty contemporary romance and NA from Vermont. Where it is cold. Very very cold.

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Coming In From the Cold
Sarina Bowen
Harlequin E Contemporary Romance Box Set Volume 1: Coming in from the ColdMaid to FitCalling His BluffBaker's Law
Amy Jo Cousins, Sarina Bowen, Rebecca Avery
Girl on Tour: 2 (Kylie Ryans)
Caisey Quinn
Harlequin E Contemporary Romance Box Set Volume 1: Coming in from the Cold / Maid to Fit / Calling His Bluff / Baker's Law
Sarina Bowen, Rebecca M. Avery, Amy Jo Cousins, Denise B McDonald

Don't Hate the Player...Hate the Game

Don't Hate the Player...Hate the Game - Katie Ashley Great premise... but the author was in such a hurry to publish, and it shows. This poorly edited book could have been so much more. Instead it's sloppily written and so much is compressed into exposition at the expense of dialog and action.

Noah is a great character. But Jake never comes into sharp focus, which is a real problem for believability.

Errors: there are some editing errors. But also some timeline problems. If Noah's mom got pregnant when she was 17, then she couldn't be 23 when he was 7. (She would be 24 or 25.)

(Also, 7 month old babies can't yet do the things the author ascribes to one in the book.)